Mirror’s Edge Review

June 16th, 2009

Faith stood at the top of the building and looked down.  The city was very pretty and bright and sort of hurt her eyes a little.  A little TOO bright!  LoL!

She talked into her ear,”Merc what am I doing?” and Merc said “Faith you are a Runner and you Run around and jump and you can also do other parkour(sp?) things.”

And so Faith smiled a little and then she started Running!  She leaped got into a good, decent run and then jumped.  It was pretty easy to do, and with a little practice she was running so good.  Sumtimes though she would try to jump up but could not and sometimes she was trying to grab onto a pipe but the GAME WORLD would not let her and she kept falling down!  She said,”What is UP with that PIPE?” and Merc replied dryly,”Pipe down Faith your are making my ears ring ha ha!”  ‘At least this doesn’t happen that often’ Faith thought at herself.

Just then when Faith was running her best friend Cel ran up to her and said,”Faith your sister is in trouble you have to go rescue her!”

And so Faith climbed up to a building and then started running again.  She jumped over a box and then she jumped over a crate and then she saw that there was a ledge with a difficult jump.  ‘I had better use my runner vision!’ and so she used her runners vision and time went real slow so that she could make her jump better.  Good thing she had run a lot to charge her vision up!

Finally she made it to her sister Kate Connor who had been FRAMED for doing something really bad!  It was up to Faith to set everything right!  She hugged her sister and said I love you Kate Connor and then she had to run because the police were there, or the blues as she liked to call them!  But Faith wasn’t afraid to run OR fight!  She stood before the cop and got close and he went to butt her with his rifle, but if she reacted at the right time she could grab it and disarm him!  ‘Too bad it is his gun and not his arm that I am disarming’ Faith chuckled to herself.  Once she had a gun, she could shoot the other people, but she could not run as good and it was hard to aim some of them.  She could also jump and kick and slide and kick at them, and follow it up with a punch ‘martial art’ combo.  She was really the Feminine Fatal!  But if she faced lots of guards she would have to try again and again because she could not take many bullets!  Thankfully she always woke up near where she fell asleep so that she could try again!  Try, try again Faith!

Finally Faith caught up with the badguy!  The baddie used to know Faith but she didn’t like him now.  ‘Something about him really grinds my gears’ Faith said, rolling her eyes at him.

‘Ha ha Faith, it has truly been five hours of real time, hasn’t it.’

Wait, you cannot break the forth wall!

‘Who are you??’

I am Kyle and I am writing this story ha ha!

‘But you are breaking the forth wall to Kyle!’

HA HA YOUR RIGHT OKAY I will be quiet ^_^

and then Faith kicked the bad guy and he fell really far away from the building.  ‘Kate I have rescued you and saved you from the bade guy.’  And Kate said ‘yes’ and they hugged like sisters because they were sisters.

But Faith new that it wasn’t over yet.  Not until she had run to the biggest bad guy there was, the city itself.  And so she went to the tall building and started to run.  She would always run and she was STILL ALIVE.

R&R!  I am currently working on Mirror’s Edge Part II and hope to release it soon!  I liked writing this one a lot and I am sorry if my story was short and didn’t make a lot of since, I am still pretty new at this writing thing!  Okay I have to go now, bye!

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